[278] MY OWN NOVEL BLACK HOLE : THE LOST ASTRONAUT CHECK IT OUT!!!

Hi everyone, actually I am new to this community and just want clear, no-sugarcoating feedback on my story. This story has already been uploaded on the Webnovel platform for at least 1–1.5 months, and it’s still ongoing. I have already written around 17–18 chapters, but I’m still confused about whether I’m going in the right direction or not.

I’m writing alone and usually get feedback from AI assistants, but I’ve realized human feedback is much different from AI. I won’t yap much, so let’s jump to the premise:

This is the story of a girl named Kavya Chandan. Kavya is an astronaut in a mission conducted by the government to approach a black hole and fetch as much data from it as possible. They needed a volunteer to go near it, and Kavya agreed to this mission. Why? Because she feels alone — she has no parents, no siblings, just one friend, the only light in her life. But how long will this light stay with her?

So, she decides to accept this suicidal mission and is ready to take off for MISSION BLACK HOLE. But destiny has different plans — and what those plans are, you’ll find out by reading the story.

Genre: Sci-fi, Supernatural, Adventure, Isekai

I will add a link to my story published on Webnovel. Please check it out and give me feedback on which areas I should improve next time, and which are the best parts of my story.

🔗 http://wbnv.in/a/23jB26s

Anyway, thank you for reading this far — and if you read my story, thanks in advance! Please also leave a review there if you can.

TITLE: BLACK HOLE: THE LOST ASTRONAUT