I've been practicing writing bullets

I saw someone saying that writing bullets is a great way to get a feel for writing persuasive copy in short bursts.

Here are some that I've written for Huel's "Ready-to-drink" meals (for context, these drinks have 35g protein and 26 essential vitamins and minerals - my one reader is a health-conscious individual who doesn't always have time to cook):

1. These bottles are SAVING gym-goers “30 cooking-hours per month”... whilst keeping them swole and shredded!
2. How this small dietary “tweak” removes cooking from the pathway to your dream physique - without filling your body with "nasties"!
3. How to avoid the "cooking trap" that destroys your flow and productivity! (And how you can stay in tip-top shape without wrecking your daily output!)

I'd really appreciate some feedback on these :)