Looking for feedback on my story

Hello, I'm looking for feedback, reads, and thoughts on my story that I have so far.

Keep in mind the first 3 chapters might become one chapter since they feel lackluster and empty. As well as adding a prologue chapter to all this.

Give it a read, and let me know what you think: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1461681

Genres: Fantasy, Romance mainly. This story is explicit and does contain smut as well.

Blurb: On her 20th birthday, Ella Al-Fayrouzi, a young woman from a quiet, humble village, receives a mysterious invitation to attend the prestigious Arcane University of Javercrest. This invitation, a gift from her parents, marks the beginning of a new chapter in her life, one that will immerse her in the wonders and dangers of the magical world.

As Ella arrives in the bustling, vibrant city of Javercrest, she is thrust into a world far different from her rural roots–one brimming with magic, intrigue, and complex relationships. As she navigates the ancient halls of the university, Ella faces academic challenges, tests of endurance, and encounters with fascinating individuals, particularly women whose connections with her range from friends and mentors to romantic entanglements.

Her journey is one of self-discovery, magical growth, and the search for true connection in a city where nothing is quite like what she’s used to.