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ld0981

11:27 PM

I hadn’t slept in days. The exhaustion was a constant weight, a consequence of a life spent running around, chasing loose ends. I blamed the insomnia on the stale motel air, the thin walls, and the mind’s habit of conjuring shadows. But then the phone began to ring.

It was always late. 11:27 p.m. on the dot. The red digits on the clock flared like an accusation just before the shrill ring. The first night, I picked it up on instinct.

Nothing. Just breathing.

Not a prank. This was deep, steady, deliberate—a slow, ragged inhale and exhale that filled the entire line. I waited, said hello more than once, but when no reply came, I hung up. It felt less like a wrong number and more like a test, a signal from someone who knew my business. A competitor trying to scare me maybe.

The next night, it happened again. Same time. Same breath. By the third night, I was desperate. I clipped the phone line, thinking that would stop it, but the next morning, the red light blinked on the answering machine—a single, unread message. I pressed play.

Breathing.

My skin prickled as if the sound came from inside the room. The air smelled of damp earth and rust, and I swore I heard a dragging noise behind that breath, as though the caller wasn’t alone.

I tried everything. I changed the number, paid in cash, and drove three hundred miles to a new motel. My new number was unlisted, a clean slate.

But at 11:27, it rang.

The breathing became a constant. It crept into my dreams, waking me in a cold sweat. I heard it outside the window, inside the walls, a presence hovering just behind me when I turned too fast.

Then tonight, for the first time, there was a voice.

I picked up, trembling, my throat dry as sand. At first it was the usual breath, but then it shifted, forming words, wet and broken, like lungs full of soil. A familiar cadence, a low rumble I hadn’t heard in years.

“...You’ve been sloppy.”

The phone slipped from my hand. My heart pounded so hard I thought it would break my ribs. That voice… I knew that voice. A hollow, familiar rasp I hadn’t heard since the last time I’d tied up a loose end.

“...I know where you put me.”

My mind went blank, except for one, final, terrifying memory: the shovel in my hands, the cold, fresh earth, and a guttural, final rasp.

I killed you.

Posted Sep 3, 2025, 6:23 PM UTC

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