Can somebody check out the first 100 pages of my WIP? (Just basic feedback)

Not all the chapters are finished but can someone give me feedback on the first 100 pages?

This is a Dystopian Fantasy taling place in the Rosarium, a brutal academy designed to indoctrinate children. The story follows Avalie Cheral or Ava, a young half fae hiding a secret while trying to survive the Rosarium without being found out. There are no human characters as of yet but they are all humanoid or fae to some degree.

TW: Child abuse, swearing, implied CSA, violence

I've tried to handle these tactfully

This is the link : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Om_XNT-L5xLNucV5Qt_WDDqll33avyI41odQ2x6qNSc/edit?usp=drivesdk