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Can somebody check out the first 100 pages of my WIP

Beta Reader Request

Not all the chapters are finished but can someone give me feedback on the first 100 pages? Some of the stuff may be confusing as not everything has been edited or finished.

This is a Dystopian Fantasy taling place in the Rosarium, a brutal academy designed to indoctrinate children. The story follows Avalie Cheral or Ava, a young half fae hiding a secret while trying to survive the Rosarium without being found out. There are no human characters as of yet but they are all humanoid.

TW: Child abuse, swearing, implied CSA, violence

I've tried to handle these tactfully

This is the link : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Om_XNT-L5xLNucV5Qt_WDDqll33avyI41odQ2x6qNSc/edit?usp=drivesdk

Posted Sep 11, 2025, 4:56 PM UTC

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