untitled, planning to turn to a folk song. would love some feedback and interpretation of it.
Well i’m sitting on a bench,
i feel warm in the shade of a tree showering me with love.
With this guitar in my hand, well i think to myself,
maybe i could pay it back with a couple chords or such.
As i open my mouth i see,
a word just within reach, with nothing there to hear.
The moonlight shaped only me, but oh what a shame,
that this ain’t the tree to lend me ears to sing for.
As i walk and burn in the sun,
leaves are falling all around me, and now the snow was covering the face of the earth again.
I see a couple birds singing, in the warmth of the sun.
As i tread so gracefully, on my road of silent shame.
Posted Sep 29, 2025, 11:36 PM UTC
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