[886] Flaming Katy

Would love some honest feedback on this realistic fiction piece.

Story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/12k7iHUt69e4m7VLsvIpTJNHsUxfoRwwerKT5_-bFv7A/edit?usp=drivesdk

Critique: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/vSIYWPy108