New Bucky Fanfic Looking for Feedback!

Hay so I just finished writing the first chapter of my new Bucky Barnes fanfic that is an enemies to lovers slow burn between him and Alexander Pieces granddaughter Eliane Pierce who works as the head of Valentinas private security. Heres the story blurb-

"Pierce."

"Barnes."

Two histories tainted by Hydra that should never collide. Last names that should never be circled near each other let alone spoken from the same mouth.

The granddaughter of Alexander Pierce can't be trusted. Thats what Elaine Pierce knew people said behind closed doors about her. Elaine Pierce learned that lesson young, and she's been proving herself in the shadows ever since.

But her new role-serving as Valentina's head of security-comes with one complication she didn't prepare for: Bucky Barnes. In a world where trust is lethal, the question isn't whether they'll collide... it's what happens when they do.

Now this is my second one as I am still writing another one but I am looking for some feedback from readers and authors on what can be tweaked or if this story will have any traction at all on wattpad (even if it doesn't Ima keep writing it for me because I like to write its very destressing for me) But like for instance I was like oh this should follow the story of them finally letting their walls come down and falling in love but then I was like would it be better if like it starts out with them already together and navigating their secret relationship? I don't know but your thoughts and feedback is appreciated. Heres the link if anyone wants to read over the first chapter- https://www.wattpad.com/story/402237445-when-we-collide