gd story i thought of
So in around grade 6 i thought of this super epic amazing story where the top extreme demons were actually people and they had powers and shit. Fast forward to 2025 and I was so incredibly bored i decided to revamp this story.
Part 4: Hellgate Menace After Ken Kolami (Tartarus) achieved top 1, he inherited the Star of Topala. His power became so immense that it attracted beings from other dimensions to kill him as the Star of Topala only exists in one dimension. The most notable of these beings was Ssoh Catara, who brought together other powerful beings to steal the Star from Kolami. Among these beings are Exen, Sakupen, Arcturus, and Firework, these beings would form the Hellspawn 5. Knowing that he couldn’t take them alone, Ken goes into hiding and the 5 take over the world. In hiding, Ken recruits Kyouki, daughter of Daniel Demishio (cold sweat) and Johann Bunnygram. In this universe, there have been people that are so strong for their time that the president of Creo (The world authority) had to put them in cryogenic sleep as they posed too much of a danger to society. One of those that were cryogenically frozen was Syrus Saillent. After the Hellspawn 5 urge Ken to come out of hiding by killing the legend Jonathan Xander (He’s zodiac guys just so yk), Ken unfreezes Saillent and goes into battle with him, Kyouki, and Johann. Over the course of 5 months, the Hellspawn 5 form dictatorships around every nation, and Ken’s group fight them one by one. At the end, only Ssoh Catara stands, and he decides to go for someone he knows he can defeat; Bunnygram. So then comes this battle between Catara and Bunnygram that lasts a whole day, and assessing the situation, Bunnygram knows he will lose, so he pulls out his failsafe for the worst case scenario. The 8 Keys of Fate: Bunnygram pulls Catara into his mind and plays a game with him, the game has 8 keys, one will grant Catara out of his mind and the other 7 will kill him. Using the 8 Keys of Fate, Bunnygram kills Catara and dies in the process.
Yeah anyways that was Part 4, I tried to make it symbolic of Tartarus being dethroned as it got dethroned by multiple levels at the same time. The parts before it aren’t too interesting they’re just kinda prologues about how the Pointercrate administration was formed and it’s mainly just tournament style fighting. However Part 4.2 follow Aqua Amelia and her rise to become the greatest administrator of Pointercrate. Can y’all guess who she is meant to be? Parts 5 and 6 follow Flamewall and Part 6 is split into 3 arcs, the main villain of the first arc is Dominic Catara (Ssoh’s brother). Part 7 is too speculative as we aren’t that sure of what will be the top 1 then but the main character as of now is Galaxy Collapse.
Posted Oct 5, 2025, 4:02 AM UTC