poetic attempt

i wrote these words six days ago,
still now, it feels like it was an eternity ago.

pain is suffocating too
exactly how i do.

pain erase the time,
i feel him, but hate to see it,

would that mean i'm becoming too much like him?

anyway we're the same person in a different line.

why God brang him if it's to hurt me,

i love him,
but love is pain
or isn't it?

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