SILVER LINING - 12 PAGES - DRAMA

Hello, I'm a 19 year old screenwriter and this is the first 12 pages of my script I'm currently working on. I just want to know how I'm doing and what I could improve heading into my second draft after this.

LOGLINE: After a brutal car accident, Sophie is forced to come to terms with her estranged mother and question if time can truly heal all things between them.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cRWGUMoaIV2xelMExjZ2hDZW6c2HBa9G/view?usp=drivesdk