First time posting here and I'd love some constructive feedback. Admittedly, I feel nervous about the post since I know these are not exactly akin to official releases and these have been incredibly fun to make for me. I know these are complex and potentially (over?) bloated subclasses--I aimed to make these in line with the top tier subclasses but with more complex play. But complex should not be confusing, and that's why I'd love additional eyes on this.

The type of feedback I most value is:

* Clarity. Is something confusing or doesn't make sense? What wording changes might you recommend?
* Broken AF. Is something so overwhelmingly powerful it has no place in 5E? How do you recommend toning it down or changing it?
* Broken AF 2.0. Are there combos with multiclassing, magical items, feats, etc., that you see absolutely breaking a game (beyond even combos like PAM and Sentinel). What do you suggest changing so it isn't broken?
* Theme suggestions. Do you have ideas on themes for the subclasses or flavor that might enhance it?
* Probably other things.

Thanks so much :) 

  
Disclaimer: the image is a stock one homebrewery pulled. Also, I have zero intention of selling these as of right now. These are more just for fun not so much trying to publish these to be totally in line with what's out there right now. Maybe some day but not the intent. Lastly, I know Artificer does not have a 2024 update (yet). The Luminary is in anticipation of that release and will likely include edits once the official update comes out.



5E24 Fateful Subclasses (a unique subclass for each official class)