[in progress][9,203][fantasy] Brujos
The type of feedback I would like is
What do you think of the pacing, are things happening too fast or too slow?
How is the character and world building, do I need more or less?
Who is your favorite character?
Would you continue reading if it was completed
It's a fantasy book about 3 siblings that find out their witches. The twins Jaime and Jelena, and their older brother Jose
Here is my email when your done reading, if you could email me a quick "I'm reading right now" that would be greatly appreciated
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_uh5v9-anAmnZ0NeUyptc_NAdAwvBwUhsbtKk5dWygo/edit?usp=drivesdk
Posted Oct 11, 2025, 7:40 PM UTC
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