[1319] Chapter 1: The Princess's Choice

This is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on.

Chapter 1: The Princess's Choice

Critique:

[1738] The Coyote Runners Chapter 1

I'm open to any feedback you think would make this better. Be honest and don't hold back.

Questions, for when you're done reading (hidden to not bias you):

!1. Does this serve well for a first chapter?!<

!2. Do you feel interested in reading more about the Janette?!<

!3. What expectations does it set about the genera, the plot, and the character arcs?!<

!4. Is the reading experience fun? And how fun? (Like if watching your favorite TV show is a 10, and doing boring chores is a 1, how would you quantify the fun?)!<