PluzzTime : Progress chapter 1

Fan Creation

Hi, how are you? I want to show you a preview of Chapter 1. This one will be longer, and here are some other variants. What do you think? I'll give information about these characters and if something bothers you, I can remove it or change it. I don't mind.

The Time God: I present to you one of your variants, Mr. TV.

Mr. TV: Nice to meet you guys...

Mr. Puzzles: My... variant? Is that the alternate version I created?

The Time God: It's one of your variants. There are more of you two and your friends out there.

Mr. TV: Please tell me your names.

WPNZ: I'm WPNZ, and this is my friend Mr. Puzzles.

Mr. Puzzles: Nice to meet you?

Mr. TV: The pleasure is mine. You will work with me at the OVT to fix the mistake you made, and your job will be to... eliminate every possible ramification.

WPNZ: Okay? But isn't it like a prison?

Mr. TV: Pff, of course not, or at least that's what they say.

Mr. TV: Follow me, I'll take you.

  • The two headed toward the glass door.
  • Variable Temporal Organization.

Mr. TV: Welcome to the VTO. The place where timelines are monitored and controlled.

Mr. Puzzles: Um... it's kind of small.

Mr. TV: This is just the entrance. Beyond that, it's bigger and has a lot of floors. But first, I must take you to our boss, the leader of the organization. I'm sure you'll be impressed by what it's like.

  • The three of them began walking down a hallway while talking.

Mr. TV: So you... are the ones guilty of committing the ramifications, right?

Mr. Puzzles: Um... yes, but it wasn't our intention... let's just say we had a dispute.

Mr. TV: What's your universe like?

Mr. Puzzles: Umm... well, it's a pretty crazy world... um... let's just say...

WPNZ: It's a world full of dangers and epic things you'd never imagine.

Mr. TV: I understand... and why did you have a fight?

WPNZ: Ugh... it's something I wouldn't like to remember, but let's just say we betrayed each other.

Mr. Puzzles: Yes, we were separated and fugitives from the police, and luckily we were saved. And that's when we caused that temporary mess trying to change the past.

Mr. TV: Wow... that must have been... a crazy adventure.

WPNZ: Yeah... hey, can you answer me something? What did the... god of time... mean about our variants and those so-called alternate timelines?

Mr. TV: Oh, of course... well, what he meant was that the past stories you knew were changed, and they created a story from scratch. Basically, the stories took a direction they shouldn't have taken, and they created alternate worlds and different versions of everything.

Mr. TV: And of course, I'm part of one of his creations...

Mr. Puzzles: And where do you come from? Me, from another dimension?

Mr. TV: Me? I come from a line just like yours... only my story changed in a different way. I had built a park called PluzzPark where everyone could have fun, a place of wonder and fun. Nothing to hide.

Mr. Puzzles: Ha... just like me.

Mr. TV: We're almost the same after all, but unlike me, I decided to take a different path... one that would make me happy and not end up like you. So I decided to put on fun programs and live shows. But I'm not into those current shows anymore. I dedicate myself to doing old-fashioned shows. You know, those things with Jazz and all that.

WPNZ: Hey, where's my version of your universe?

Mr. TV: Oh, that's it... well, you see... as I said... I... never met you.

WPNZ: What?

Mr. TV: As you heard, I never met you. Because I was never a fugitive, nor did I want to be ultra-famous, because you were never created, in a nutshell.

WPNZ: Oh, I see...

  • OTV Main Office.-

Mr. TV: Well, here is our boss's office. Introduce yourselves properly.

  • He opens the door, and there was a human girl.-

Mr. TV: Here you are, boss. The two culprits.

???: Leave them to me. There's a lot to talk about.

WPNZ: Um... hello? Nice to meet you...

???: So you two are the ones responsible for causing the timelines to break, right? I thought so.

Mr. Puzzles: Nice to meet you too... He's WPNZ, and I'm Mr. Puzzles. Um... Could you tell us who you are?

???: Me? Maybe the TV man should know.

Mr. Puzzles: Me? But I don't know what you're talking about.

??? : Of course you should know.....father.

WPNZ: But...what?

Mr Puzzles: WHAT?!!

???: That's right, Dad... in another universe and life... you created me.

Mr Puzzles: W-WHAT?!! But when did I create you? I would never create a daughter of my own.

???: Maybe not in your universe... but from a variant of you, he did. In one of your alternate lines that you made.

???: Let me tell you.

  • I've seen everything you went through and suffered. You were an evil madman, then a fugitive, then you separated from your friends, and now you're here. But what if I told you, based on that, let's say an alternate line was created.
  • In my universe, you hYou've been through the same thing that happened to you in yours, but the only difference is that you were never forgiven.
  • Remember when you argued with Meggy and your friend, and you found yourself in an alley alone remembering your mistakes? In my alternate timeline... you were never able to escape the police. You became a fugitive, and your sentence was just around the corner.
  • Because I could never escape the police, nor did you have any protection, and you knew you'd die when they caught you, you decided to create me to continue your lineage. Of course, I'm not human; I'm an android based on you. You meticulously built me ​​and gave me a life with your spark in your finger.
  • That was when I was born and you adopted me as a daughter. You promised me you'd return to take me away from the Mushroom Kingdom. However, I was waiting for you, and you never came back. Months and years had passed, but there was no response from you. And all I'd learned about you was from SMG4 (alternate), that you were a criminal, liar, and traitor.
  • That you were just a blackmailer who wanted fame and recognition. And some time later, news of your death at the hands of DeathCube came out.

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Posted Oct 28, 2025, 4:56 PM UTC

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