Chapter 1 of Will of the Vagabonds [LitRPG, 2700 words]

Hey everyone,

As someone who is a serial rewriter, I’ve almost completed the draft of a complete novel for the first time. I’ve achieved this great feat by writing a very unserious LitRPG story to try and prevent overthinking. However, I’ve come to the point where I enjoy writing these characters and I’m thinking of revising the draft to post on RoyalRoad. I let myself touch up the first chapter a bit as a reward for not restarting yet, and was hoping to get any impressions or feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-9YUqVxhrikoUnEAGnA-bPZse5CdFsup1jBgG0Ljles/edit?usp=drivesdk

Is the introduction too jarring and weird? Would you keep reading past this point?

Thanks to anyone who even clicks this post!