[1477] Chapter 1: Marked by Fire

This is the first chapter of my novel: (half) I couldn't add the entire chapter here.

Prose type: Close limited (I've been fixing the POV problem, and I hope I got it cleaner now)

My motive for my first chapter is to be mysterious.

Genre: Fantasy

Any critique would be excellent.

However, I'd like to know if you like the first chapter.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10yIRBXoED2CbJVqT8m_8SfPOcKdkWG2VDpyfUBDqcl0/edit?usp=drivesdk

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