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Mystie Mountain

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Episode 4: “The Hollow Camp”

A convergence of hunters and the hunted.

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I. — Elias

The mountains rose in layers of slate and fog.
He moved through them like a ghost unwilling to vanish — thin, unwashed, beard stiff with frost.
Each step farther from the ridge was a wager against being remembered.

By the fifth day, the forest thinned into a clearing filled with smoke and voices.
He crouched behind a fallen pine.

Below, tents made from army canvas, patched and low. Men circled a fire, rifles stacked like a crude altar.
A camp of the hollowed — deserters, drifters, scavengers who had crawled out of war and refused to die properly.

He counted seven, maybe eight.
One stirred a pot over the fire, another sharpened a blade on stone.
The sound carried like teeth grinding.

A woman sat apart from them, wrapped in a quilt.
Too still to be at ease, too alive to belong.

He waited until dusk before stepping out.

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II. — The Camp

They saw him before he spoke.
Rifles lifted.
He raised his hands, palms open.

“Not here for trouble,” he said. “Just passing through.”

The tallest of them — a man called Keller, beard like iron filings, one eye clouded white — studied him.
“You smell like Smoke Ridge,” Keller said. “That fight’s long over.”

Elias didn’t answer.

They let him share the fire, if only to watch him closer.
He ate from their pot, stew thin as water, bones floating like proof.

As the night deepened, they began to talk — not of glory but of what came after:
burned towns, broken deals, the price for turning in deserters.

One of them, a boy with a scarred jaw, spat into the flames.
“They’re payin’ five dollars a head now,” he said. “Dead or near enough.”

Elias kept his eyes on the fire.

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III. — Anna

She marked another day on the wall.
The chalk made a sound like a match being struck.

The dog barked once, then twice.
Through the window: two riders on the road, their coats heavy, hats low.

By the time she opened the door, they’d already stopped at the gate.
One she recognized — Sheriff Wheeler, as before.
The other wore a black scarf over his mouth, eyes sharp, coat stiff with frost.

Wheeler tipped his hat.
“Mrs. Vance. This is Deputy Holler. We’ll be askin’ after any travelers passin’ through.”

“None here,” she said.

The deputy’s gaze moved past her to the interior — the woodstove, the single chair by the fire, the letter on the mantel.

“Hard country for a woman alone,” he said.

She met his stare and said nothing.
Wheeler gave her a long look — something between pity and warning — before turning his horse.

When they rode off, she waited until the sound of hooves faded, then bolted the door and sat beside the stove until her heartbeat slowed.

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IV. — Elias

The woman in the camp spoke that night when the others slept.
Her name was Mae, or so she said.
She’d been taken from a burned village west of the ridge.

“You runnin’ from the war?” she asked.

“I walked out of it,” he said.

“Same thing,” she said, “only slower.”

He noticed the way she looked at him — not with trust, but with recognition.
Everyone in the camp carried the same expression: men and women unburied too soon.

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V. — The Bounty Men

At dawn, Keller roused the camp.
Two scouts had returned with news: riders on the western trail, armed and clean-shaven — men who still belonged to a cause.

Bounty hunters.

Keller smiled, showing the gap where two teeth had been. “Well,” he said, “looks like they’ve come to feed us.”

He ordered half the camp to flank the ridge.
Elias didn’t move.

“You fight or you die,” Keller told him.

“I’ve done both,” Elias said.

Keller’s grin widened.
“Then you’ll fit right in.”

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VI. — Anna

Snow again.
The road gone under.
She fetched water from the well, the rope stiff, the handle biting her palm.

Each motion was ritual: fetch, pour, feed the fire, watch the sky darken.
The emptiness of routine was safer than thought.

She imagined him somewhere beyond the ridge, alive.
The thought was not comfort but defiance.

That night, she sat before the fire, letter in her lap.
The ink shimmered faintly, as if still wet.
She whispered to it — not his name, but the sound of breathing beside her, remembered.

The dog lifted its head and whined.

Outside, far off, a single gunshot cracked the air.

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VII. — Elias

The ambush came swift — smoke, shouting, snow turning black.
Elias fired once, twice, before diving behind a stump.
He saw Keller fall, his white eye open to the sky.

Men scattered through the trees, some firing, some running.
He crawled low, gripping the musket, until he found Mae crouched behind a log.
“Go,” he said. “They’re coming.”

She didn’t move.
Her gaze fixed on the clearing where a horse bolted, dragging a rider through the snow. And a bullet wound near her left oblique.
“Too late,” she said.

He looked back once and saw the badge gleam on a man’s chest — not Wheeler, but his kind.

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VIII. — Coda

When night fell, the forest was silent again.
Elias stood among the bodies, breath fogging in the cold.
He took a coat from one, a knife from another.

The bounty men had come and gone, but they’d left signs — tracks leading north, toward the valley.
Toward Anna.

He should have felt fear.
Instead, something else stirred beneath it — a pull, almost physical, like warmth remembered from before the war.

He started walking.

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End of Episode Four

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