I wrote my first ever screenplay for the pilot of an indie animated horror series.

• Title: Lunetown Peak - The Holiday Discount (EP1)
• Format: Limited series episode screenplay.
• Page length: 50 (Excluding title page)
• Genres: Thriller, Horror, Mystery
• Logline: "When estranged twins, Sean and Steph, accept a too-good-to-be-true holiday discount at a remote Swiss ski resort, they soon realize that something sinister buried beneath the mountain is waiting for their arrival."
• Series Synopsis: "In the year 2012, estranged siblings Sean and Steph decide to reconnect with a vacation at the remote Lunetown Peak Ski Resort in the Swiss Alps. Their peaceful getaway quickly turns into a nightmare when they, along with other guests, become stranded on the mountain. As they struggle to escape, they uncover dark secrets about the mountain and realize they are not alone. What was meant to be a reunion becomes a fight for survival in a chilling tale of horror, thriller, and mystery."
• Feedback Concerns: Dialogue, pacing, structure, characters

Hi, My name is Swapilla. I'm a beginner writer and is my first ever script. The script is completely written by me using Fade In, and it is for an indie animated horror series titled "Lunetown Peak." Since this is my first ever script, I needed as much feedback and critique as possible. Note that my first language is not English, so if you notice any spelling errors or awkward wording, please lmk so I can fix it. I'd also be happy to explain anything that might be confusing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1pEBwPexTK6MNP6_Saoq7kH_OeXzzhg__/view?usp=sharing