Silent Night

This is my first poem and I was hoping to get guidance on what I could do better, any advice is appreciated, thanks in advance.

The soft touch of your hand in mine, The roar of the engine moving down the highway in the silent night.

There is no words I can use to prove how much I love you, You say there is no fixing things at this time but I’m willing to fight.

From coffee in the morning to popcorn at night, I really do appreciate all you do for me.

I know that you don’t have faith in this anymore, but I still believe that there can be a we.

I tried my best to make you happy again, but this doesn’t have the be the end.

No matter where this goes, I will always be in your corner.

While we have this time apart it leaves me here to ponder and think, What things could have been I guess we will never know.

But I guess we’re gonna have to run with the punches and go with the flow.

Posted Nov 5, 2025, 11:40 PM UTC

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