[1898] The Reunion

This is the second chapter in my tennis story. I posted the first chapter on here a couple of months ago and I apologize if I did not reply to people's critiques at the time, but I found a lot of helpful stuff.

For context, Dave suffered a career-ending injury at the US Open four years ago and is reunited with his old rival/friend in this chapter. I'd like to know how Leo's characterization is working and if it's okay or too expository. Thanks for the feedback.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18yQ9ix_jjBXarFEg3prCbxYup0yhwS5Keo7O6AK5wb4/edit?usp=sharing

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