ODIUM (Neo-noir/Crime) – Pilot – 59 pgs

LOGLINE: When a missing persons case threatens his new life, a private investigator must face the cult that taught him how to kill.

Mainly looking for feedback on the script’s ending. Beyond that, essentially anything and everything that sticks out to you or rubs you the wrong way. Story, pacing etc - have at it.

Thanks in advance for reading:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PzZcjdyryB6deC-cDPjlzUlY64unZRu4/view?usp=drivesdk