LMK what u think of my Chapter 1 [Fantasy, 1594 words]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qc_inV2m46NurTEjmy9ObjcicdDi9CXlVbrXu34uk6c/edit?usp=drivesdk (CHAPTER 1)

hi! please critique my first chapter and drop what you think. you can be as honest as possible. thank you so much! im also concerned if ending the chapter that way is fine, and im open to suggestions.

i want to improve so feel free to tell me anything im writing wrong in this Chapter. thank you so much!

also, i'll just add this in case you're curious about the prologue or what i wrote before Chapter 1 happened. this link will lead you to the whole novel (just prologue and chapter one honestly lol)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OF-imOiS9y-ubAhRgni3L6uxyh9gjTVg31S-MYFIXfc/edit?usp=drivesdk (WHOLE NOVEL LINK)