[1541] Troyd's Tomb v2

I wrote this story for this year's Halloween Contest. The main thing I've done in this revision is beef up the ending, but there's also a change in year (2025 to 2024) to correct the otherwise-inaccurate moon phase, which, fortunately, no one seems to have noticed.

Troyd's Tomb v2

Crit: The Case of the Eaten Ancestor, Chapter 1