Huffing The Fattest Copium Blunt (Fanfic Post)

I decided to say "Fuck Makoto's Fate" and started work on a fanfic comic script. I would heavily appreciate any criticisms and feedback. Check it out and enjoy! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OqFzRV7k06oTG8RJzBcV5eE_f_t1d1U65GDl6HZDMOc/edit?usp=sharing