New to worldbuilding and decided to get on here for opinions

I will drop down below a google doc with all of the information/lore/worldbuilding below. I really want to turn this into some form of media some day which may be tough because I cannot draw, model, nor animate very well. Please be honest and let me know what can be better!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZPrLhWQgSz_NsV2pNzXa--EnnAP5NHAU0FqekT6x95U/edit?usp=sharing