International Personal Statement

I’m an international applicant from the US and was wondering if a current student or knowledgeable applicant would be able to read my personal statement? I applied for Philosophy and I think it’s fine, but I am unfamiliar with the UK format. For context I have a 3.3uw/3.8w gpa, 5/4/4 achieved APs and 4 pending APs (predicted 5s) as well as a 1530 sat. If anyone has time please let me know!