Poetry? But i call it Lostetry? (Horrendous I know but I’m manic lol)

*nowhere near finished because my brain is mush atm but just wanted some kind of feedback whether shitty or good.

Those beautiful trees.

Those beautiful trees, In my untamed garden. Of emotion and grief.

Those beautiful trees, They’ve seen a lot. Tears, fears and everything in between,

The ugly crying faces, But also the sheer joy. Looking at the pressure, That the (universe/world?)can apply.

How much can a human can endure in the space of a year?