I need more eyes on this, but am not sure to post it here.

I am working on my breakout comic I hope to get published one day. A supernatural horror x mystery x action comic called "Alpha and Omega: Demon Hunters". (For future reference, Alpha and Omega are a pastiche of Kindred from LoL, with Alpha being Lamb, and Omega being Wolf). the current volume I'm working on (the first one) follows Alpha's origin story. How his parents were killed by a monster, and Alpha was taken by an unrelated monster, a fey queen called "The Pale Queen" at a young age (5), before mysteriously washing ashore on an unknown beach with no memory of what happened to him or who he even is, taken in by the Archangel Michael in a human facade and a wolf pup (no relation), and taught the ways of demon hunting and holy magic, before setting out onto the world as Alpha and Omega, only for his mysterious past to come back to haunt him.

Problem: I need more eyes on it. Can I/Should I post the draft here or is there a better, more fitting subreddit to send it to?