Highschool Student - Feedback on Critique Essay

Hi everyone, I'm a high school student applying to colleges this cycle for economics & public policy (hopefully). I enjoy writing, and on the side, I am building a portfolio to demonstrate some of my manuscripts/papers. I finished Friedman's 'Capitalism and Freedom', and I eventually wrote this. Would love feedback

https://docs.google.com/document/d/11fYFYC758eLxXl6aIMSfMsYZFG9JpAYb5-JgVT8cwSI/edit?usp=sharing