HOLLOW POINT - PILOT - 73 PAGES

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**REPOSTED TO ADD LOGLINE, TWs, LINK, & FIX PAGE COUNT

GENRE: Drama

LOGLINE: A woman trying to outrun her toxic relationship and privileged past flees to Hollow Point, a dying tourist town built around legends of a cosmic alien being, where one impulsive action ignites a volatile chain of manipulation and violence that slowly peels back the town’s quirky facade.

TW: Domestic abuse, predatory behavior towards a teenager, implied substance abuse, mentions of suicide

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1zIrDJ-JMdYjK6Xm6eaoCsccyom4UIyyl/view?usp=sharing

So over the past 2 months I've been drafting and polishing a pilot script for a TV show I've had floating in my mind for around a year, and I think I finally got it to a point where I'm super happy with it!! This is kinda the first screenplay I've ever wrote, so sorry if the formatting isn't perfect.

I would also be happy to trade feedback, just dm me if you want ((:

Posted Dec 4, 2025, 9:47 PM UTC

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