Penny Cricket - Short Film - 15 pages

Penny Cricket

Short Film

15 pages

Comedy, Drama

Logline: A mild-mannered cricket in a human world is bored with her career and makes moves to get into stand-up comedy.

This is a first draft and I'm looking for any feedback, but especially interested to hear suggestions for the jokes told by the comedians, as well as the scene at the end when Penny trashes the heckler.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1fLxWCoyxtfotL9qY6ZUgy7ijyrkVc9k9/view?usp=sharing