[In progress][60000][Scifi]FerroxMustDie

Hi All, I'm writing a book that I might self-publish and put out into the universe, I'm looking for creative feedback on the first chapter, I originally made it as a screenplay, but I've since novelized it. I'm new to this channel, and I would like to get feedback:

It's a Dieselpunk novel with a strong vibe about blending humanity with AI consciousness, is it Trope-tacular... yes it is, but it's a rich world and the back stop for the universe I'm trying to create.