Hello!!! Please review my recent writings.

Hello! I’m 19 years old I’m not sure if this will reach many people but I’m slowly learning how to further my interest in writing! I love to write about my feelings a lot I struggle with grammatical errors, my vocabulary is very limited I do take some time to research a few new words but I would love to take any tips on how to improve, I will accept any criticism as well on my recent writings ! Thanks to so much - outspoken meow

#1

I wish I was a butterfly, my wings outshine my despaired flaws, flutter so they won’t see how much I stutter , my beauty brighter than my despondent mind.

#2

I want the sun to cover me in its warm, fiery light. Engulf my darkness with warmth, blanket me in the glistening glow, wrapped in a comforting grasp. It’s not so cold anymore.

#3

An empty mind Filled with doors of darkness They creak open The strength in my grasp fails me Wind blows fiercely Engulfed in the shadows of despair A seemingly dark Yet comforting pull This isn’t new The familiarity in the darkness It’s warm Is it ok?