Is this any good 🥴😽🫶

I want to become a writer, I’m new and i just want to know if I’m doing a good job lol.

When I saw her for the first time I remember that I was in awe, I always thought that her hot headedness and determination were the things that drew me in. But what truly drew me in was the way she would draw people in with her kindness and compassion. I couldn’t keep it in me anymore, I had to tell her that I was so deeply in love with her.