Grammatical Query (1) - Leeching sentences
Hello. Provided that this subreddit isn't dead and that there is at least one person who's interested in helping me out, I am going to be posting grammatical queries at semi-regular intervals.
You may be assured that I am only posting queries which I, in spite of scouring the web, have not been able to find a clear answer to elsewhere. Ultimately, I hope that you(the reader) and I(the author) will both be able to benefit, in some way or other, from these posts. Consider this a ''test post''. I'm not exactly used to posting on forums and I, quite frankly, have no idea what to expect in terms of engagement.
Anyway, enough prattling and onto the query at hand:
It has a certain glow to it, the action figure. A glow that, together with its vibrant colors, forcefully extracts an uncanny impression implying that the action figure is not, in actuality, from this world—implying that it is, in fact, from another world entirely—one which the action figure has yet to realize belongs to the past.
I've got a tendency to do... well, whatever this is. To, at times, write in sentences that more or less leech off of the previous sentence. I've played around with a series of different symbols. Ultimately, the paragraph featured in this query is the best rendition I've been able to concoct so far. Is there a symbol you think might be better suited for the task of connecting my ramblings? Do let me know. If not, is there any way I could restructure these sentences without losing the jumpy nature inherent to them?
I appreciate all and any responses, thank you.
Posted Dec 9, 2025, 8:58 AM UTC