Can someone grade this composition

So I really needed some grading done and since I finished all of my schooling recently I couldn't chat to my music teacher. Can someone grade this piece I composed.

(and yes I did use parallel fifths on purpose cuz I couldn't find anything else that would work)

here's the link for the video

youtube.com/watch?v=Prp4coI0s6I

here's the link for the score

musescore.com/user/85974406/scores/30049526