Council of Four Deck Feedback

Hi everyone! I'm pretty new to Commander and I have started playing with some friends using proxy decks (so card cost / budget is not an issue). We are aiming for Bracket 3 in terms of power level.

I am looking at putting together a [The Council of Four] Deck and this is my current list
https://moxfield.com/decks/z_0OWlFzYkC76uJVsRes4g

Currently I imagine win cons would either be through building up token knights and going for big swings with the aid of Dion, knight buffing cards, Moon shaker cavalry etc. Or by card draw through [Triskaidekaphile] and [Approach of the Second Sun] (potentially using [Remand] to instantly redraw [Approach of the Second Sun].

Is it trying to do too many things? And are there any obvious cuts/adds you would make?

Thanks a lot!