Although I am not from Scotland, I have noticed the rising popularity of musical compositions based on Norse legends, often performed in Old Norse. I felt that scottish gaelic deserved something similar. As I wasnt able to find anything with the help of AI and alsoa significant amount of my own time spent :) I (and AI of course) have created a Gaelic composition inspired by this legend: [https://whirlpool-scotland.co.uk/legend/](https://whirlpool-scotland.co.uk/legend/).

I hope it’s okay to post this in this subreddit. I’m not planning to use the piece for any commercial purpose its purely a passion project.  
Any feedback, especially regarding the refinement of the lyrics, diction, and overall accuracy, would be sincerely appreciated.  
The text follows below:

O hò ro, Coire Bhreacain,  
Far dannsaich na tuinn mar chlaidheamh;  
O hò ro, Coire Bhreacain,  
’S ann thusa a dh’fhàgas gaol air a’ bhàigh.

**VERSE 1:**  
Ma phòsas tu mise, mo rìgh òg grinn,  
Feumaidh tu seasamh far shàmhchair a’ linn;  
Trì oidhcheannan garbha anns a’ choire gun tròcair,  
Far shèideas a’ ghaoth agus sèideas i tuilleadh.

Bidh an cailleach a’ feitheamh gu fann air a’ chreig,  
’S bidh na stuadhan gu h-àrd mar na beanntan gun bheinn;  
Ma mhaireas tu beò tro’n chreach anns an dorchadas,  
Is ann dhomh-sa a thig thu mar bhrìgh nan seann sgeul.

**CHORUS:**  
O hò ro, Coire Bhreacain,  
Far dannsaich na tuinn mar chlaidheamh;  
O hò ro, Coire Bhreacain,  
’S ann thusa a dh’fhàgas gaol air a’ bhàigh.

**VERSE 2:**  
Thog e gruag nan òigh air gach gleann is gach tràigh,  
Airson ròpa nach lùbadh fo stoirmean a’ chànrainn;  
Ach thuirt na bana-bhuidsichean: “Cha tèid gruag do leannain,  
Oir cha b’òigh i mar càch chan eil purrachd na cànain.”

Dh’fhàs a leannan mar sgàil ann am frasan nan gaoth,  
A’ coimhead a’ ghaoil anns an oidhche gun chaoimh;  
Dhùin iad an ròpa le sradagan òir,  
Ach gun i fhèin ’na lùbadh agus bhris sin a cridhe.

**CHORUS:**  
O hò ro, Coire Bhreacain,  
Far dannsaich na tuinn mar chlaidheamh;  
O hò ro, Coire Bhreacain,  
’S ann tusa a dh’fhàgas gaol air a’ bhàigh.

**VERSE 3:**  
Thàinig an stoirm mar shròn-bhàis na mara,  
A’ reubadh nan ròpa tro’n dorchadas garbh;  
Sheas e mar chreig an aghaidh a’ chruaidh-fhùirneis,  
Ach chrìon gach snàithlean fo ghairmean na fairge.

Nuair bhris an t-aon fhuilt mu dheireadh a dh’fhuirich,  
Thuit e sa doimhne far ghabh an Cailleach cùram;  
A-nis ann an gaoir tha na h-eòin is na tuinn,  
’S e guth an rìgh sin a’ glaodhaich gu sìorainn.



Hello everyone, I’m working on a personal project and could really use your help.