Rage Curse Onslaught List Création

Hello Folks,

Been eyeing Rage Curse Onslaught and just imagined a list on-theme with an ovjective to have something playable (not highly competitive). Wanted the sub's opinion and brain juice to make it better.

Key ideas:

• Going heavy on "Blood angels" units (characters, death company, sanguinaries)
• Building somewhat similar to LAG (3 hammers, rest is MSU)

The list:

• Dante + 10 vvets with fusion pistols
• JP Captain + fights first + 6x Sanguinary (lance)
• lemartes + 10 death company
• Mephiston
• Combi lieutenant
• Intercessors
• 2x5 JPDC
• DC dread
• 2x5 JPI
• 1x3 Outriders
• 1x5 scouts

Potential strenghts/plays:

• Dante and vv's dismantle transported troops
• lemartes and 5+++ strat are quite resilient
• lance sangs + limb from limb can kill about anything.
• DC dread provider access to (the only) damage 3 in the list, but can rush and die on an objective to sticky it
• MSU jump death company Will most likely trade up on anything, can also sticky die, and serve as an anti-fights first, sacrificing one unit with fights on death to a fights first threat
• multiple units for secondary play that can really benefit from "limb from limb" (outriders can push 18 6/-2/2 attacks for a strong trade-up play)

What do you folks think, can it be playable as-is what would you change ?