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wild_purpose555

Brittle

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A captive of my past, trying to be present to see

Everything hinders a state of a crescent Increase

A cursed tongue with the confessions I speak

Forgives, the only way to reap the blessing I seek

Mistakes made that could never be patched

Severed ties with lies but wouldn't detached

Infact, you've seen all my flaws, Witness my falls

Watched me crawl but still will answer my calls

Pieces picked up, put the clock back on the wall

Darlin understand, I'm brittle but not broken at all

Posted Dec 10, 2025, 3:00 AM UTC

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