Whisper exe concept (first time trying making an exe lol) pixel art once I get feedback

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Whisper & the corrupted whisper/whisper.SIN

 Character and lore.

Whisper was a charecter who only had close ties to certain charecters, Sonic, tangle, and sometimes some freedom fighters. But mainly

 Sonic and tangle. While she was asleep one night a mysterious entity known as “01100011 01101111 01110010 01110010 01110101 01110000 01110100 01101001 01101111 01101110” or instead it also could be called “SIN”. One day whisper sees a chain of badniks during a fight and tries to help out as well. She uses the purple wisp with her wispon and for a few seconds it’s fun…until it deviates. It goes off path and whisper is sent FLYING crashing into a wall panicking breathing heavily.

She looks over at the mess as she watches the wisp get bigger and bigger before piloting into thousands of different enemies growing to monstrous proportions looking similar to a black hole but it’s alive it’s moving and it’s hungry. Sonic and tangle…are nowhere to be seen. Consumed by the eating energy that she unleashed SHE CAUSED. Whisper doesn’t talk. The city gets worse tails is soon consumed trying to get data and running out of energy as he flies, so is every other freedom fighter eventually falling to this…all eating of nothingness. It doesn’t even resemble a purple frenzy wispon anymore it’s purple color now charred with handprints of people‘s last cries and echos of trying to escape, just to add to its overwhelming size. Then she sees her…tangle.

Whisper cries hugging tangle her words coming out in a tangled breathless rush. Everything comes out and tangle isn’t saying a word. She looks up and it’s…the mass. The purple covering her eyes as the scent of screams death and despair fill her sensitive nose. It feels like being lit on fire going through the most painful part just to restart again. All of it cultivating into a moment of clarity. Whispers thoughts come rushing back she grabs her swords trying to slice as she’s being slowly pulled in. Something inside her feels off but it’s slowing her down from being pulled in so she doesn’t question it not like she has time to anyways.

Eventually the sword manages to make a hole that she rips open using her…bare hands? Somehow? Bombs have deflected off this things body yet she rips it open? Something’s not right. But whisper is too busy running crying confused. She sees tangle again but that’s impossible she’s not falling for the same trick twice. She runs and runs until her legs give out. Seeing flashes of tangle everywhere. Her insides feel like they’re melting pain, white hot pain surging up her arm like she’s being electrified the horror she claws at her suit tearing it apart until she’s only in a tank top and shorts (this is not a dark story stfu) and she sees a dark black creature crawling out her chest. She panics slicing it with her sword it grows back it starts covering her body more and more…

And then She wakes up. Was it a dream? No it can’t be…she still feels the pain. She quickly checks under her shirt…nothing? Nothing feels wrong it feels like she just had a cramp in her sleep? What’s…happening?

She stands up shakily gripping her swords and covering her face with her mask as she walks around the ruined city scape. Scraped badnicks, hanging corpses from people who ended it before the black hole did, she can’t believe all of this was her fault. She lets out a small…laugh? She doesn’t feel happy. Not in the slightest she feels like crying but she laughs and she laughs and laughs before coughing up blood and something black and viscous. She slowly throws up onto the street black mist covering her as she does, her throat feels like it’s tearing itself apart her nose seeping blood. She passes out into her own blood. But her body still moves her legs stand. It incorrectly as if her body’s bones were wires. She walks again through the fire. The city looks like it’s in an endless night. Whisper…? Puts her mask back on covering her whole face. She feels no pain anymore just the lost face of dead passing people.

Black substance pools around her feet as she walks around the city. Using her sword…as if it can cut through anything. She finds a wall and her body tears itself apart. She feels every single atom in her body be destroyed then reconstruct itself on the other side of the wall. She has no idea where she’s walking but she knows it’s somewhere important. Her sword drags behind her leaving a black trail, corroding the rocks instantly and causing energy to pool into the cracks.

She arrives at her destination. A very very dark room. She pauses looking around. Feeling her body destroy itself then reconstruct again she appears before it…her wispon. It’s covered in a black mess, blood, and the purple wispon that’s connected to it is huge. Whisper walks towards the purple wispon. She tries to get herself to stop to claw herself snapping her fingers even biting her lips but her legs keep moving. Until she’s inside the frenzy wisp. She walks…somehow? On a black bridge that’s reconstructing itself. She can finally feel herself she takes her mask off and blood splats onto the platform before disappearing. “I didn’t drown?” Whisper says and immediately coughs up blood. Those are the first words she said in..a year? 2 years? She can’t remember when this whole thing started. She just hopes it can end. 

I’ll finish it if people ask for it. This is so embarrassing to post and I don’t know if it’s going to be well received. I don’t want it to look like I’m just making an emo edgy charecter I’m trying to connect plot points and have everything a reason. I’m sorry if it’s too fast paced that’s just my type of content the less filler there is the better for me. If you don’t like it that’s okay just leave a dislike and move on please don’t be rude in the comments. And if you do comment please make sure it’s constructive criticism? Please? This is the first exe concept I’ve ever done so…this feels so “aajasol” to post 

Posted Dec 11, 2025, 9:49 AM UTC

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