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From egg to my final resting bed let me grow through it all

Let me suffer, let me laugh Let me climb, let me fall

For those who go past me I’ll surf there wave of innovation

From thought into material, the death of man contemplation

Shaping the world so as it shapes me, Diving into my future so precipitately

I’ll scream my existence into stone, etching my name it

For to suffer is to have lived, so know there is no vein in it

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