Hi guys here it's a part of chapter one of my manga.

The story will get better passing the first chapters. (Just trust me). If some one wants to be my partner in this project by drawing this manga I will appreciate.( This is just a sketch of what will really be I will add way more in to).

In the cold December of 2025, a young girl was walking with her friends on the white freshly snow covering the road. Before school they decide to take the long way back home after the classes are finished to make a snowball war in the park of there neighborhood with other class. In the school everything went normal in the life of Daiana. But she was still in mourning after her mother pass away to a better life. That tragical accident happened a few weeks ago, she was still suffering the lost of her only family she had. Now she was lonely setting on the chair in class, looking at the window. Suddenly, looking at the window she remembered something, the last words of her mother. Her mother told her before she pass away when she will need to feel better leaving the heavy burden of her shoulders:

-Just make a pray in a lonely place in that old family language that mama teach you ok?

-Of course mom, (slowly crying) i will make everything for you.

-This is not for my, it's for you! Just remember, always pray to make things go better in your life if you feel that you need it.

After remembering what her mother told her, she went after the class on the roof top of the school to make her pray. The wind was passing through her hair. The sun was setting letting out rays of light all over the shiny white snow. Daiana was on her knees, felling the frozen air all around her face. And sitting there on her knees she start to praying.

-If some one it's in there, just please hear my pray. I just wish for a change in my life. ( Here will be added letter of Valdirian the language i make).

And she waits, and waits, but nothing happened. She began to cry, disillusioned by her own innocence, thinking that a simple prayer in a strange language would somehow help her change her life.

At that moment, the sun began to bathe her face with its warm rays, piercing the clouds that covered the beautiful blue sky behind them. Feeling the warm rays on her white beautiful cheeks. ( Feeling that sensation of pure warm hug of the sun she started crying remembering her mother's loving hugs).

Thank you for reading.

Posted Dec 29, 2025, 7:48 PM UTC

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