[1675] Life Birth And Death

Chapter 1 of a longer novel

Critiques

[932] - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/CNJhijoWOk

[2111] - https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/GE45TBuwcY

My piece

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10V1FjiqsWNMrI7U_hqQ8cy7_LldBMnl7Gb42j_4lzvA/edit?usp=drivesdk