[1122] Dirty Business.

A short story which (hopefully) makes you feel things. All feedback welcome, would especially like notes on:

- How tight is it? I want it lean, mean, and wrapping itself up with a bow.

- Did it make you feel anything?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PfbvxxC6dLmU9LvFhUtO-4jDac3FYkdaLWOm7e0De_c/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks in advance.

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