First screenplay — would love fresh eyes on the first 5 pages

Hey everyone — I just finished my first screenplay and I’m having trouble getting perspective on it.

If anyone would be willing to read just the first 5 pages and let me know:

• if anything hooks you
• or if you’d want to keep reading

that would mean a lot. Totally understand if that’s all you have time for.

Script (PDF, view-only):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W7YsiBcnoh9yKRedWZEtJillO5LTzq6erq7Bqz8L-8o/edit?tab=t.0

Thanks in advance — and happy to return the favor if anyone wants notes.