[1293] The Loyal Thief of Morrow

Hi everyone,

Nice to meet you. First time post.

I really struggle with revising, so I've dedicated this year to learn how to edit and set a goal to have something polished to "submission ready" level by the end of the year.

All that to say, The Loyal Thief of Morrow is a fantasy short story. I have reread and rewritten certain lines so many times that I'm questioning my ability to write a sentence. Any and all feedback is welcomed and appreciated.

Crits: (1216 - A Sunny Day in the Park) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/tZnseKyid6

(849 - The Forest of Erin) https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/s/rFltXqBIWq

(Story Link) https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vs68CPTVsCx6WqwhFcs6TGPcwmEh-AoX/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=116642546738047830984&rtpof=true&sd=true