Point of View

From a distance, it looks easy.
He did that, He achieved that,
so what’s new?
 In the shoe,
it is twice as hard as it looks.

Every time, I find myself in a pit,
and I have to climb back up to the top
just to get to the surface.
So I do not fall below from the ground
 they are standing on.

It’s not the same.

 ~Rishab Jain

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